Found a lot of missing last letters in some words + some minor grammar mistakes. I think you should rewrite the dialog options to be in one particular style - they are a bit messy.
But I liked the story a lot. The general idea is great and I loved your structure. Definitely want to try Ink now!:)
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I swear I had mentioned this, but I did a video play through of the game, very good, loved it!
The Solo Adventurer - Exploring power with Grievance
Thank you so much! I’m glad you enjoyed the game and can’t wait to watch your video.
Could we get a downloadable?
Done! You should be able to download the zip now
Thank you :D
This is a fun little story. I like the different POVs
great short story! love the concept and the use of ink to bring a sense of interactivity into the text.
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it
After some choices the story just stops for me and I have no option to continue on.
I think I found that bug and it should be resolved now. Thanks!
Found a lot of missing last letters in some words + some minor grammar mistakes. I think you should rewrite the dialog options to be in one particular style - they are a bit messy.
But I liked the story a lot. The general idea is great and I loved your structure. Definitely want to try Ink now!:)
Thank you so much for the feedback! Ink was a great tool for this. I'll take a look at those typos
how do i get this to run in browser
It should run automatically I believe. Your browser version may be causing errors.