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I swear I had mentioned this, but I did a video play through of the game, very good, loved it!

The Solo Adventurer - Exploring power with Grievance

Thank you so much! I’m glad you enjoyed the game and  can’t wait to watch your video.  

Could we get a downloadable?

Done! You should be able to download the zip now

Thank you :D

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This is a fun little story. I like the different POVs

great short story! love the concept and the use of ink to bring a sense of interactivity into the text.

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Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it

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After some choices the story just stops for me and I have no option to continue on. 

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I think I found that bug and it should be resolved now. Thanks!

Found a lot of missing last letters in some words + some minor grammar mistakes. I think you should rewrite the dialog options to be in one particular style - they are a bit messy.

But I liked the story a lot. The general idea is great and I loved your structure. Definitely want to try Ink now!:)

Thank you so much for the feedback! Ink was a great tool for this. I'll take a look at those typos

how do i get this to run in browser

It should run automatically I believe. Your browser version may be causing errors.